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Saturday, October 13, 2012

YOU ♥


Butterflies in my stomach
never seem to rest
With you by my side,
everything is the best.

 I can't get enough of the sweet
melody of your laugh
when it's been a long crazy day,
i can't wait to sit on your lap.

You make me smile like crazy
In loving you, i'd do it infinitely
even if we fight night after night
i'd still yearn for your hugs that are so tight.

you're crazy, imperfect 
and addictive
for stealing my heart
you'd never be a fugitive

you're the one i'd always love,
even at times,
when love isn't enough

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Written on a small table napkin, around the time when I was just falling helplessly in love with my three year boyfriend. <3

32 comments:

  1. wow..i love this, i hv really been looking forward to seeing a blog about literature.

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  2. aaw so sweet! this is something id write for my fiance :D

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  3. This is such a great poem. Is your next book going to be all poetry?

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    1. It won't. It would be a full novel. However I just love twisting up poems.

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  4. This is beautiful. You should start a line of greeting cards!

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  5. Three years? He sure is patient! ;)

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  6. How beautiful, I am going to forward that one to my husband to brighten his day.

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  7. Really sweet. I always love reading your writing and how you capture things in such a vivid and beautiful way.

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  8. Your emotion really comes through the poem. I think it could work as lyrics to song actually. Very nice.

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  9. This is very sweet, and very reminiscent of early love. I like it, it makes you feel happy. :)

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  10. So sweet :) The best words are ones that you think up on a whim.

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  11. Perfect for this time of year (having just come through Valentine's Day)! Very sweet reflections on love/relationships.

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  12. So sweet. I like the emotion you packed into it.

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  13. This is very cute!!! You are a very talented writer!

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  14. I love such sweet love like this. I love when love blossoms and before the struggles of blending a relationship beings. I love the purity of it all.

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  15. This is such a cute poem! Thanks for sharing.

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  16. I love this line the most "You make me smile like crazy, In loving you, i'd do it infinitely" Reminds me of my husband.

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  17. You have a beautiful ways with words you should come over on Mondays and join in the haiku challenges.

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  18. Aww that is so sweet, the feeling when your with the one when you love <3

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  19. Beautifully said! Super sweet words from the heart!

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  20. When you are in love, it really makes you feel like you could take over the world.

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  21. Awe..this would be such a cute poem for my hubs. Even after eleven years together everything still applies.

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  22. Awwwww, sweet romance. That's cool that it just flowed from you and you were able to capture it by writing on a napkin.

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  23. I love that! You have such a great talent, thanks so much for sharing

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  24. I write poems on my blog as well. Your a talented writer. I look forward to seeing more poems

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  25. That is such a sweet poem! I never could write poetry, I admire your skill!

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  26. I wish I could connect, Le-an. I always love your writing but today I am furious at my boyfriend and re-considering the relationship.. so I can't connect to a happy poem about love. :'(

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  27. What a beautiful poem... It i so thoughtful and romantic too... Cute drawing.

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  28. That is so sweet. I really like that poem.

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